I especially like the third verse:”…above me_ on a knot of curtain_ like a sniper.”
And don’t we all secretly consider the sting personal?
This one’s a keeper.
Eke William says on August 4th, 2010 at 5:37 pm:
Simple and exquisite.Paints a most vivid picture.Beautiful.
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I especially like the third verse:”…above me_ on a knot of curtain_ like a sniper.”
And don’t we all secretly consider the sting personal?
This one’s a keeper.
Simple and exquisite.Paints a most vivid picture.Beautiful.
;o)